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By the Campfire by Lapis-Razuri By the Campfire by Lapis-Razuri
last contest prize for :iconkaido-san: ;3; I hope You'll like it Honey!!
from the left: Kaido, Myrrye and Veri from the story "Kadawer"
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Hello !

I dont really know how to start... :3.

First : I love your vision of characters and the situation (dont ever know originals characters) and it's improving impact on the public ^^. Good point and good choice.

The physic and technique are really good, there are some little mystakes or defaults, but in globality that's a good part, and you cover the sheet verry well ^^. I particuraly love your trees and hairs.
You copes very well with anatomy and positions, but care with the perspective between the little girl and the man. We can believe than his leg and the child are in the same plan with his head or his second leg, and his book isn't really clear too. Where is the book ? On his left leg or in front of his bust ? We dont really know because of the hand holding the book doesn't overlap the left leg or other part of the picture.

Another point is the shadows. You can enhance its a bit to creat a more visible contrast between the luminous background and the gloomy foreground. I think if you add some shadows on the man and the closer girl (who's sleeping) you can improve a little bit the volume in your picture.

By the way, well done for the trees, the fire and nature overall.
Love the grass o3o !

See u !
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Paciot Featured By Owner May 7, 2014
I don't seen similar image so far. These faces are a little strange for me, but rest is good.
Background are beautiful. Total: You did a good piece of work :)

PS. Sorry for my English. Greetings from Poland :)
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:iconlapis-razuri:
Lapis-Razuri Featured By Owner May 7, 2014  Professional Traditional Artist
thank you very much for commenting!
Greetings from Poland as well ; )
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Paciot Featured By Owner May 7, 2014
:P :D

Przynajmniej sobie trochę angielskiego przypomniałem ;)
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:iconpaciot:
Paciot Featured By Owner May 7, 2014
Jaka głupia gafa XD
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SaijeeHiguchi Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Your art is sooo cute. Can I study your style?
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3deffect Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2014
nice work
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Ajax94 Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2013
Cute! :D
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rubyelizabeth Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
damn thought that was Kagome, Sesshomaru and Shippo with fox ears from Inuyasha
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Firlulet Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Już kończą mi się słowa na te wszystkie piękne prace ;-; To jest przecudowne *o*
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yukitora1 Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2013  Student Digital Artist
AWOESOME!


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sourpatchmelonhead Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2013
Is there a story based on this? I would love to read it if there was:) Oh and nice artwork:)
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KingNikolas Featured By Owner May 26, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Jeez, you're an amazing artist!
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SaiTheNeko Featured By Owner May 20, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
This is absolutely incredible! I love how you drew the characters and the background especially is beautiful!
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AkumaKitties Featured By Owner May 6, 2013
your good at drawing.
itīs awesome
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flameheart10 Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2013
I love the expression and detail you put into this. Everything in this picture is awesome! Great job! :heart: :D
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OoOoOoOmnaOoOoOoO Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2013
aww so cute!!
and i love the detail!!
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OoOoOoOmnaOoOoOoO Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2013
and wt is kadawer?? seems like an interesting story based on this peice of art!!
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Lapis-Razuri Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2013  Professional Traditional Artist
haha You could ask the owner of the characters about that :) thank You!
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OoOoOoOmnaOoOoOoO Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2013
and tht owner would be...???
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:iconlapis-razuri:
Lapis-Razuri Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2013  Professional Traditional Artist
:iconkaido-san: :)
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OoOoOoOmnaOoOoOoO Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2013
oohhh thnx:)
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AstraeaHelena Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
i love your style!!!!
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tokoysprings Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2012
Wah hag great I'm speechless 😲 digital art looks great!!!
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:iconbjsx:
BjsX Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2012  Student General Artist
lovely colours they are so beautiful! I jus wondering, have u ever learn how ot draw?
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:iconlapis-razuri:
Lapis-Razuri Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2012  Professional Traditional Artist
thank You so much!
well we're learning all the time right? :D I didn't take classes for drawing like that If You mean it
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WWWIIWillowIIWWW Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2012
cute.........
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Mitchu Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2012  Student General Artist
Love this! Such cozy atmosphere. Also great composition colouring! :)
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alzith Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
this is simply wonderful. the atmosphere provokes so much happiness :dummy: i love it!!
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szarosen Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
JAKIE TO PIĘKNE ;vvvvvvvvvvvvvvvv; ten ciepły klimat, te charaktery postaci, emocje, dopracowanie, wow ;_; dlaczego ;_;
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Lapis-Razuri Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2012  Professional Traditional Artist
asdghalkgh :heart: dziekuje! ciesze sie,ze Ci sie podoba! >w<
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Ranalis Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
The composition on this is incredible. And your colours make it feel so mellow and warm. I wish I had your talent!
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Fey-R Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh, wow, ta praca jest niesamowita. Wszystko wygląda tak delikatnie i naturalnie, kolory są odpowiednio przyćmione. A trawa jest po prostu prześwietna, mogę zapytać jak robiona?
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flyingcorpseinthesky Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Zbyt dawno nie byłam na twojej galerii ahhh ;_;
Bardzo mi się podoba ta atmosfera, wygląda tak łagodnie <D Chociaż oświetlenie jest nienaturalne? To znaczy, można wytłumaczyć drugim ogniskiem, a poza tym łagodne cienie bardzo pasują do tej sceny, ale z backlightingiem wyglądało by to niezwykle magicznie ;v;"
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:iconlapis-razuri:
Lapis-Razuri Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2012  Professional Traditional Artist
a wiesz, nawet probowałam zrobić backlight ale chyba zle sie za to zabralam Q_Q palnęłam plamą na postacie i jakoś nie chciało dobrze wygladac xD'''
wiec postanowilam udawac,ze jest drugie zrodlo swiatla (ta jasne, chyba świetliki OTL;;;)
dziekuje >w<
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Iiwi Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2012  Student General Artist
This is a really amazing work, and I can only applaud you more and give you huge super hugs and kisses cause you didn't "cheat" with using a premade background, you created such a beautiful, unique, and your own environment for them to be in, This is totally what I love seeeeinggg~!! People not cheating.

I love the lighting of the trees and how the environment looks like you really want to run around in it, and have fun with nature. There faces are so beautiful, I love the different symmetry you put into there faces and there expressions are cute as well, it's like everyone is interacting here, and I adore that, with there body language and expression it comes together in a very nice and lovely picture.

The way you coloured it is very lovely as well.
I know you asked for critique but I really don't see much that craves for attention. I'll search deeper in order to help you though~! becuase I love the beauty in you as an artist in wanting to learn and keep on learning.

The nice fireplace is beautiful as well, and the lighting it gives off it makes me want to roast marshmellows over the fire! You did such a wonderful job with the scenery thoughh:heart:
Keeep up the good work~!
:iconrubcheeksplz:
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Lapis-Razuri Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2012  Professional Traditional Artist
thank You for Your time to create such a nice commentary, it put a smile on my face and was such a heartwarming thing to read :iconasdfghplz: I always try to draw as much as I can from my head so I'm happy it shows somehow >//< :heart:
I will always try my best! :iconbunnyglompplz:
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Iiwi Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2012  Student General Artist
Your welcome ^u^ I enjoyed commenting on your works, cause your truly a beautiful person artist and person and please keep that!
Yes it does show, very beautiful job!!Keep on striving to keep on learning ^u^!!
I am always rooting for you,:heart:
:iconrubcheeksplz:
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Leonna-Kanine Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2012
Oh, my goodness, this is amazing! 8D But... how come the girl has only pointed ears while the boy has actual cat ears? o.o Personal preference or different races?
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Lapis-Razuri Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2012  Professional Traditional Artist
different races :D
thank You!
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Leonna-Kanine Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2012
No, thank YOU! XD I love finding artwork like yours~
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sebastianhaze Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2012
great work very cute
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ninja1589 Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
so adorable and incredible!! You are so talented!!!
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Kizzikoo Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2012  Hobbyist
this is so cute!... but I couldn't help but notice the girl is a little cross-eyed.. is that intended? Sorry if i sound rude, just wondering.
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13MATTallica96 Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Daww x3
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Zumea Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
cute
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RedNoseBlueCheeks Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2012   Digital Artist
maybe its just me ... but what i see in this picture is a grown up version of Shippo in the middle (from Inuyasha btw.) and Kagome & Inuyasha's Kids next to him :D
but maybe it is just because i recently started to rewatch the Anime :D
Nice work!
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Kikixeni Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2012  Student
Awww love that little girl.
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Jan7777 Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
GREAT
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firemisse Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
This is really nice, I like the colors, texture and the style. But I'm not convinced by the light effect because it's night time and I can't see much the light or reflections of the fire... But It's great... Not much for a critique so I just comment what I think...
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eda1102 Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2012
haha, why are they both groping him? I suppose the guy must be really uncomfortable, or not?...
I love, love love the colouring. Somehow seems a bit less "soft" as your other works, not as perfectly blended, the brushwork left visible in some areas, I think it adds on some depth to the picture.
Also, your use of the textures, it's just amazing. I can see you've used several textures/patterns in this one, but it doesn't look overdone at all; not in the foreground, int he grass; not over the campfire. It all just fits nicely together.
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